UPDATE

So I got my grade back for the research paper Draft and surprisingly it's a potential grade of a B. I'm happy it's a B because I know exactly what I did wrong with my essay. Since I was rushing to get it done because I had so much other work to do with my job on top of, I went of on a tangent at the end. My beginning argument was very clear that I thought media had a negative effect. At the end I tried to find a solution to lowering the influence by telling parents what they should do. Not that it was a bad idea but I went about it the opposite way. Instead I should have blamed the parents for neglecting their children and not being concerned enough.  Also I need to include other reasons that my neglect children's well being like the schools or government. I will just do some grammatical changes and fix my last 3 paragraphs and I think I'm good for an A+. :-)