Research Paper

This is my research paper.

Student comment update #3

I commented on Fernando Souza blog.

Student comment #2

I commented on Dionne. The link is here.

Student comment update

I commented on Christianhttp://christiancajamarcaeng103.blogspot.com/2013/11/progress-110513.html?showComment=1386095438371#c8778554309254401401

Update

Currently revising my essay in class. I haven't had a chance to do it because I was so busy with auditions and scenes for my other classes. I bought myself the new asus 2 in 1 tablet which included Microsoft Office. Now I never have an excuse for my format being messed up. I still have an idea of what I have to write to make it better. I have to include how the authority figures are responsible for not monitoring their children. This is the last class so I also have to comment on people's blogs, then if I have time I can even edit some old work to get a better grade.